Sunday, February 15, 2009

As a networker, you know how important marketing and advertising is for your business.

If you are a student of effective marketing, you also are aware of the importance of having powerful headlines whether you are marketing online of off.

Tom Schreiter has graciously provided some good ones for you to test. He also has shared some lousy ones!

Here they are straight from Big Al:

Here are four great headlines and opening sentences.

When you attend my "live" workshops, you learn how using a great first sentence can totally change your business. If your first sentence is right, your prospect will become interested, lean forward, open his mind . . . and well, the rest is easy.

What are some good first sentences? Here are some that I've read recently or heard at my workshops:

* "Do you know someone living in pain?"

* "How to fire your boss and start your own home-based business in less than 15 minutes."

* "How to take a six-month vacation - twice a year!"

* "Earn extra money every time your neighbor picks up the telephone."

And here are some bad, confusing headlines from real life:

"Lung Cancer in Women Mushrooms."

"Teacher Strikes Idle Kids."

"Miners Refuse to Work after Death."

"Juvenile Court to Try Shooting Defendant."

Want to create your own custom first sentences and headlines? Then visit

Tom 'Big Al' Schreiter
Fortune Network Publishing
PO Box 890084
Houston, TX 77289 USA

Test the good ones out to see what happens!

Monique Hawkins
540-858-2885 anytime
Skype: Monique371
Be A Mentor With A Servant's Heart

P.S. Ask me about my 2 minute story.

P.S.S. Everybody knows you have to use the secret language when talking to prospects. It's all explained beginning on page 46 of this free ebook, Success in 10 Steps:

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